Wednesday, February 4, 2009
Keep the poems coming!!!
Wow! Another night of 4 blog posts! That's two nights in a row. Looks like people are taking the time to write some poetry after school. You make your teacher very proud. Now, to step things up a little, let's make sure we are using dictionaries and double (and maybe even triple) checking our work to make sure it makes sense and looks good. I hope you are enjoying this blog as much as I am. Reading your work is as much fun as it is educational. Thanks for your work, and keep those poems coming!
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His name is Josh
ReplyDeleteAnd hes like a squash
And he is as sick
a moldy stick
P.S.I Was sick when this was done Josh^-^
Here comes Dodgeball Sam
ReplyDeleteThrowing the ball with a bam
Missing the kid with a pout
To bad he just got knocked out
I have a dog named Geo
ReplyDeleteHis farts could kill a treo
His farts might make you cry
Oh man I hope I don't die
His name is Ben
ReplyDeleteLoves to watch ESPN
He likes to tackle
He is as feisty as a jackal
Her name is Gretta
ReplyDeleteI bet you've never met a
Dog that's so frightening
Like a bolt of lightening
My awesome mom's name is Sherry
ReplyDeleteShe is smarter than a dictionary
Even if she swallowed gum
She wouldn't look a smidge bit dumb
The Fastest Shoes
ReplyDeleteI got the fastest shoes, they are really great. But, the 1st time I tried them, my clothes started to disintegrate. I sprinted to a bush in the nick of time, then when I thought of it I just committed a crime. "What should I do" I thought in my head. So then I laid down and pretended like I was dead. I need to take these back right now, but how? So I bolted to the store as fast as I could. I didn't want to put them back, but I knew I probably should. When I got there I put them on the shelf, as quiet as could be. Then I left as soon as possible so no one else could see. Obviously that day was not that fun, but now I need some shoes, just so I can run.
By: A.J.
Snow White
ReplyDeleteThere is a puppy named Snow White
She looks so cute but boy, can she bite
'Cause when you look in those innocent eyes
You will get a BIG surprise
She will bite her leash in two
Just so she can get to you
She will chase you down the street
And act as if you were lunch meat
She looks like a monster from a Horror show
Just get near her mailbox and watch her blow
I have to run as fast as I can
This is a true story from the mailman
There was a girl named Polly Lou
ReplyDeleteHer bright eyes will fool you
Each hair on her head
Could put you in the nurses bed
Her nickname is porkupine girl
If you get hit your stomach will twirl
You eyes will water your head will spin
Only if you get poked by that pokey pin
You'll feel a rash gather on your arm
That girls hair could do great harm
This is a true tale
From a guy who got hit and did wail
When my mom dances
ReplyDeleteWhen my mom dances Buster goes wild.
When my mom dances she acts like a child.
I tell her it's almost time for school,
When my mom dances she acts like a fool.
By Allie
Spring
ReplyDeleteSpring, spring
a magical thing.
Birds, flowers,
really anything.
Spring, spring
a magical thing.
Oh how I love spring.
Spring, spring
a magical thing.
The sun, the rain
too much of a thing.
Spring, spring
a magical thing.
Oh, how I love spring.
By Allie